My name is Shantay. I go to Riverdale School. I live with my mum, my step-dad and my brother.
I am good at writing. I like playing with my friends. I would like to get better at netball. I would like to get better at my spelling.
A person who inspires is Pink the singer. I like her because of her songs.
Tuesday, 12 June 2018
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Kia ora shantay
ReplyDeleteI really liked what you write on your
I learnt that care about your family and who you inspire
Maybe you could white bigger
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DeleteKia ora, I am Zoe from Makauri School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you said a lot about yourself and what you would like to get better at.
I learnt that you like pinks songs and you would like to get better at netball and spelling also you like playing friends.
Maybe you could add a bit more about yourself and what you are looking forward to.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog here
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Zoe
kia ora zoe thank you for looking at my blog I really liked what you sied it was really positive from shantay
DeleteKia ora, I am Peyton from Ormond School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you said whatsaid what you would like to learn and what you can do
I learnt that you live with your mum and step dad and you are good at writing
Maybe you could have more writing and tall me why you like pink’s song’s
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://ormondpeytona.blogspot.com/
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Peyton
hi peyton thank you for for looking at my blog maybe you could searat your words from shantay
DeleteKia ora, I am Jorja from Ormond School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you said what you want to get good at like netball and spelling.
I learnt that you are inspired by Pink and her songs.They really help you believe in yourself.
Maybe you could write some more information.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://ormondjorjac.blogspot.com/
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Jorja
kia ora jorja thank you for looking at my blog i will write some more information from shantay
Deletehey shantay i now you love talking about the human heart :| from justis
ReplyDeletethank you justs for looking at my blog
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